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Kiss


He caught me staring,
Knew I wouldn’t be sharing,
Raised a brow and looked down,
His smirk suddenly turned into a frown.

He was the darkness in the light,
Knew I saw him as a creature of the night,
Thoughtfully reaching for my hand,
His motives for this I’ll never understand.

His action warmed my cheeks and made me melt.
While knowing what he did, knowing what I felt,
He leaned down to whisper in my ear.
His voice became more than I could bear.

He told me nothing sweet,
Knew we shouldn’t meet.
Yet he kissed his way to my lips,
Hands coming up to rest on my hips.  

When we broke apart,
I suddenly felt something sting my heart,
And he left without a word to forget,
To leave me with a taste of what I can get.

He had been cruel and a person to blame,
Wrong and evil-doing had been the same,
But then there came maturity; a promise sealed with a kiss,
And I fell in love with a shadow, realizing what I’d miss.
©2007-2009 ~surrenderdammit
:iconsurrenderdammit:

Author's Comments

Okay, I have no idea about the names for different poetry but yeah I took a guess.

Anyhow, no flames about the ship. I like SSHG, so there.

I realize my poor grasp of the English language causes my poetry to turn out simple and crappy. But still, I kinda like this one.

Poem (C) surrenderdammit
Hermione Granger and Severus Snape (C) JK Rowling


PS//I chose 'teen or young romance' coz it's from Hermione's PoV and you don't really know if Snape loves her back so that makes it her romance, yes? Teen or young romance then XD

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:iconcarriimehome:
ew.. i thought it was Draco/Hermione... Not something.. well.. illegal.. It's really good!! But i don't like the pairing.. But it's written REALLY well!!!

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Broken hearts won't beat-
Sad eyes won't lie.
Memories to keep-
Never to die.
~He'll never see her cry~
:iconsurrenderdammit:
haha well in my country it's not illegal just not morally right ;) but yeah, anyway, thanks! ^^ it can be Dramoine too you know :P I love that pairing too ;) ah well, thanks for the comment! ^^

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"Fascinating."

"Financially I'm set for life, provided I die next week."

"Hon är rätt fin, verkar ha en skön stil; det kanske är så att hon är ensam?"
-Hon är fin Familjen
:iconemoguitargurl:
U rite good poetry and a comment coming from me.....wait..i usually dont give comments so.. yeah bu ur even better than i am
:iconsurrenderdammit:
wow thanks then! :D :heart: glad you liked it and commented! ^-^

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"Fascinating."

"Financially I'm set for life, provided I die next week."

"Hon är rätt fin, verkar ha en skön stil; det kanske är så att hon är ensam?"
-Hon är fin Familjen
:iconregrettful621:
I don't speak well either, but I like it. I am Russian. I like your signature by the way.
:iconsurrenderdammit:
aww thank you! :D I'm glad you liked the poem! and haha thanks for the compliment on my sig as well ;D

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"Fascinating."

"Financially I'm set for life, provided I die next week."

"Hon är rätt fin, verkar ha en skön stil; det kanske är så att hon är ensam?"
-Hon är fin Familjen

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